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Rhythm of Soul (for J. Pastorius)

Poem By: flannelman
Poetry


a piece written for Jaco Pastorius, which he will never read, as he died long before he should have, during the height of his career. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 15, 2008    Reads: 22    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   



Smooth beats, flowing steadily from your agile fingers,
Gliding over the strings with amazing precision.
Your talent, your vision, your grace;
You inspire the mind and soul of any who listen.

Complex sounds weaving through the room,
a steady stream of passionate musings
echoing in my mind, lingering like a kiss,
long after the last strains fade away.

 

3-15-08


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Some of the best work ever written was written from experience; you have the experience of having played and having heard. You've done well again. Keep it up.

Much love...all of my love!

Posted: Mar 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks hun

You are most welcome my liege. You deserve that, all and pages more.

Much love...all my love!

Posted: Mar 15, 2008



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