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Waste Of Bread

Poem By: flannelman
Poetry


Tags: hate, poverty, war, poet

again based on a writing assignment, but i really enjoyed how it turned out. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 7, 2008    Reads: 33    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


Where's my bread, man?
We can go to the moon,
But we can't give a poet a little seed money?
Save a child in Africa,
But not pull me from the quicksand of poverty?
The fruits of my labor wasted,
My body broken to support the upper class.
Waging war on terror in another land,
Not fighting to save the homeless man in D.C.
A storm of bullets from men who don't know,
why the work they do is for nothing.
In a tempermental land, like a womans ego,
Brought down by a single word: Hate.

 

 

2-7-08


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HATE - can be a very driving forse in one's life

Posted: Feb 7, 2008

Author Comment:

indeed it can. whether it be blatant or veiled, it drives many people and things.

btw, men's egos are as "tempermental" as womens'. I'm glad you're not actually in Iraq. No American should be, as you put it, getting their "body broken to support the upper class."

Posted: Feb 10, 2008

i know that a woman's ego is as temperamental as a mans, i just liked the classic-ish image that it presented, especially when women are treated as much less than equal in many of the places where war is happening.

Posted: Feb 11, 2008



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