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Poem By: Fletcher
Poetry


You know those moments... when everything seems so horrible that you just want to die...? This one was spawned from the memory of one of those moments. (as you can see, I have a kinda random vague writing style... hope ppl can catch the drift of it..) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 10, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


The lights are dim, the night so grim

Left behind from what once was

Soul torn till tears seem to beautifully glow

Slipping…

 

Fly away, they call me,

Hither and thither, quiet haunting

Pills and blades have paved the road

Slipping…

 

Dripping life, dropping knife

Terrified screams, tardy hesitations

Oh mummy, oh daddy, forgive me

Slipping…

 

Beautiful pain, remorse behind

Craving the bright light all while

Smothering evil darkens eyes, so bleary

Slipping…

 

Too late, too late, love so lost

Returns to glimpse the final breath

Agony, cries, heart wrenching screams

Slipping…

 

He rises, cries burn the throat

Never has loss seemed so eternal

Bullet carves the path to dreams

Slipping…


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Comments:

Gruesome poem with the violence

Posted: Apr 10, 2008

Author Comment:

uh.. somehow I dont think thats supposed to be a compliment..? And no its not gruesome. It´s plain reality with some of the youth of these days. Gruesome is the slaughter in the Middle East.



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