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A random Swirl

Poem By: floatLinger
Poetry


This is a sonnet i had to write in english cause were doing a topic on poetry and when i was done i was just like '....wow' i dont actually know what its about i was writing it and just went along the flow of words and came out with this...... enjoy View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 26, 2008    Reads: 39    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Swirl

She swirls in a dissolving desert

Her life shatters in a flash of thunder

A touch leaving her six feet under

Her body to them but a sweet little dessert

X

Her mind is twisted crudely

A thrown away, given up rubiks cube

The crowd leaves her tossed aside rudely

An eaten up, overdosed junkie tube

X

A stolen innocence, a violated imperfection

A human being loved, lost and rotted

The memories desperately blurred and blotted

And thrashing under rejection

X

Once snug and safe curled in a crystal ball place

Now fallen and cracked, she floats in unknown black space


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Comments:

Hey there, man, this is superbly awesome!...I luv the imagery here, and I could put meaning to every stanza...here's mine; a girl who is taken advantage of by society so she turns to drugs for consolation, (maybe)...or tries to find true love but it is again withdrawn from her reach, she is ignored, thrown away, so she pretty much dissapears for she has lost her soul...okay I'm done..*Two Thumbs Up*
*Meg*

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

Author Comment:

yeh thats a good idea of what its about ill use that one.... see i have no idea what its about i just wrote out of nowhere.... i like your perspective thanks

i like it. i gave me an imaginary picture that i cant decribe (thats a good thing lol)

Posted: Nov 30, 2008

Author Comment:

it sure is



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