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this is a very simple poem that i wrote when i felt like nobody would miss me if i died View table of contents...
Submitted: May 15, 2008 Reads: 32 Comments: 3 Likes: 2
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Wow, its like a continuation from your last poem. They fit perfectly together,and you got a good point, we mourn for a while but after a while we forget and we move on, we stop missing them. What would the dead think if they rose and found us all happy, their best friend having forgotten all about them, your superb, love everything you write, very thought invoking, keep it up.
Posted: May 15, 2008
WOW this is such a true poem...
Posted: May 17, 2008
Great one , but sad. To feel alone isn't good at all, and someone always will miss us .
Posted: May 19, 2008
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