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this is a poem i wrote for my sister.... we recently saw our ill aunt who couldnt even recognise us... my sister got very upset because my aunt is dieing and she loves her very much View table of contents...
Submitted: May 17, 2008 Reads: 23 Comments: 2 Likes: 1
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Amazing, I actually hava tears pricking my eyes! OMG I pray your aunt gets better! this part made it for me though!
"All burnt up
In the fire of illness
Now in a hospital bed
Imminent stillness"
I'm dumfound right now. STAY STRONG! all my love xxx
Posted: May 17, 2008
Its sad losing someone we love, you wrote that poem so well I di share your pain. Love it, your just so awesome.
Posted: May 17, 2008
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