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i wish it would be alright

Poem By: foreverflorence
Poetry


this is a poem i wrote for my sister.... we recently saw our ill aunt who couldnt even recognise us... my sister got very upset because my aunt is dieing and she loves her very much View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 17, 2008    Reads: 23    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Come to me
Ill hug you tight
Ill wipe your tears
Tell you all will be all right
 
You look up
I wish you would smile
It would make my work
Feel worthwhile
 
You make me want to
Make you happy
But I can’t feel
That it’s a possibility
 
I cry inside
Because you are sad
I just remind you of the good times
The good times they had
 
Yet even I
Can’t remember
The good times gone
Left to one last glowing ember
 
All burnt up
In the fire of illness
Now in a hospital bed
Imminent stillness
 
Except the rise and fall
Of her chest
Through her breathing tubes
She cannot protest
 
We talk to her
Yet she doesn’t recognise you
She doesn’t know of your relationship
It now can’t be renewed
 
Come to me
Ill hug you tight
Ill wipe your tears
I wish it would be all right


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Comments:

Amazing, I actually hava tears pricking my eyes! OMG I pray your aunt gets better! this part made it for me though!
"All burnt up
In the fire of illness
Now in a hospital bed
Imminent stillness"
I'm dumfound right now. STAY STRONG! all my love xxx

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

unfortunatley she wont she has abouth 4 months to live tops... thank you for the comment

Its sad losing someone we love, you wrote that poem so well I di share your pain. Love it, your just so awesome.

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah its sad.... hehe thanks not sure i would say im awesome but thanks anyway hehe



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