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a poem about suicide and how it affects the people who are close to the one who commits suicide more than they can imagine View table of contents...
Submitted: May 15, 2008 Reads: 36 Comments: 3 Likes: 1
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Wow, this is no exxageration, that is the best poem regarding death I have ever read. People always right about the dead but right at the end you indicate that the people still living will feel the pain forever, so true. Not many people see that, they see death as the end of all misery, but its only the end of their misery, everyone else will wonder why it happened? What kind of God lets people die or get so miserable that they kill themselves? Awesome poem, sorry for the long comments.
Posted: May 15, 2008
*crying* this is really really really sad :( :( :(
Posted: May 17, 2008
You are right about this issue, suicide is not the solution. I'm not religious , but even then believe in suffering after death when someone suicide.
Posted: May 19, 2008
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