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shattered promises

Poem By: foreverflorence
Poetry


a poem about how some people can never keep their promises View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 8, 2008    Reads: 50    Comments: 2    Likes: 3   


Caught in the blast
Of shattered promises
And all around me
They lay like corpses
 
Three days
Is that all you can do?
When you say you love me
I need to trust you!
And if you cant tell me,
When they shatter,
Then my heart will explode
You’ll be caught in the spatter.
 
Caught in the blast
Of shattered promises
And all around me
They lay like corpses
 
The thing
That you need to learn
Is my trust
You have to earn
Ive been hurt
So many times before
So many losses
That ive abandoned score
 
Caught in the blast
Of shattered promises
And all around me
They lay like corpses
 
Your actions
They have consequences
And you have had
So many chances
Every piece
Lay before me as glass
I slit my veins
Get buried under the grass
 
Caught in the blast
Of shattered promises
And all around me
They lay like corpses
When im gone
At least you’ll know
The next time you’ll see me
Is on heavens plateau
With eyes full of hurt
And cuts to my wrists
A ghost of the past
No buts or ifs
 
I was caught in the blast
Of shattered promises
And now me and my tears
Lay as corpses


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Comments:

*crying*

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

Author Comment:

aww dont cry

wow!!! OMG!! THIS IS SOOOOO STRONG!! IM AW STRUCK!!! read my poem its called "forgotten promises" it has a similar story too it!!

WELL DONE!!

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks very much



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