the prison of the mind

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Poem By: foreverflorence
Poetry

Tags: contruct, mind, wall, walls, yell, cell, prison

about how sadness creates a prison in the mind of its feeler View table of contents...

Submitted: May 28, 2008 Reads: 34 Comments: 3 Likes: 2

My lungs are bursting

Bursting to shout

To scream

Let me out

From this prison

From this cell

Im not meant to be here

You’ll hear me yell

My mouth will sigh

My heart will break

My head will pound

My body will shake

I will smash the walls

Knock them down

Ill find another one

The same reddish brown

They’ll keep on rising

To keep me in

They’ll rip out my heart

Make me pale and thin

My these walls that are rising

I think you will find

Are walls of sadness

A construct of the mind

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Comments:

Wandiola

woah...that just took my breath away! its a great poem!! Great choice of poem!! i liked it toooooooooo much!!!

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks very much

Trainman238

WOW this is really amazing...

Posted: May 31, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

xpurexpoisonx006x

Very good!.
I love the imagery.

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

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