two lovers

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Poem By: foreverflorence
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i wrote this one a long time ago when i was split apart from my boyfriend by my parents... i was feeling bad so i wrote this very short and simple poem View table of contents...

Submitted: May 15, 2008 Reads: 29 Comments: 5 Likes: 4

Two lovers,

True love,

Torn apart,

Given the shove.

Two eyes,

Crying blood,

Feelings coming out,

Like a new rose bud.

Two hearts,

That will beat no more,

Until things,

Are like before.

One wrist,

Cut to deep,

One girl,

Eternal sleep.

One boy,

Broken heart,

Why did things,

Go this far?

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Comments:

Wobster

Holy bleeding doritos! You are phenomenal, the moment I seen your profile picture I was like wow that is a beautiful girl and then I read this poem and, wow, your amazing! That was such a deep poem, it doesn't drag on like a lot of poems, its short but bears such powerful feelings,and I love your writting style! I am becoming your fan, are you really 14?

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks very much and yes i am 14

Wobster

Ooops, lol, computer is slow, my bad.

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe dont worry thanks again

Wandiola

Really good! the girl cuts herself! I hope you didn't!! any who I'm pressing an I LIKE

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you... and yes the girl did cut herself but thats what i felt like doing... its almost like you see what could happen in a soap opera in front of you and you realise what would really happen... thanks again