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this is a poem i wrote for a girl a used to really like and she was messing up her life so i wrote this to give to her only i never did. im sorry if anyone reading this smokes or does drugs but im against it so dont be offended please View table of contents...
Submitted: May 15, 2008 Reads: 29 Comments: 4 Likes: 1
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This is a really powerful poem. I liked it a lot because of the emotion that your words carry. Can't wait to read more of your writings!
Stephanee :)
Posted: May 15, 2008
is this based on true events, I am so sorry. I know, guys can be real pigs, I am a guy so this must sound funny coming from me, we're all pigs in nature, some just fight it more than others. I loved this poem, it really did nearly bring me to tears, I hate seeing a girl suffering like that, mistreated when she should be treasured and treated as a goddess, you all deserve better. And yeah, drugs and boose does have that effect on people, my mom's dad was an alcoholic and she could tell you how bad it was. I loved it, it made me cry but I loved it, can't wait for more.
Posted: May 15, 2008
This is REALLY good and REALLY sad. It made me cry thinking about how so many people have to go through all of that when they really shouldn't have to.
But this is REALLY good work. keep it up!
Posted: May 17, 2008
Good one ! You friend did not know how luck she is for having you as friend. And Drugs are terrible things we should avoid . You did well talking about it.
Posted: May 19, 2008
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