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Stranger Heart

Poem By: fred
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Submitted: Apr 9, 2008    Reads: 75    Comments: 6    Likes: 1   


Stranger Heart

I have nothing left, and no where to go, 
I lost my love, and lost the hope,
These thoughtless dreams and off i wept
no one to hold, dreams just swept,
kept it to myself, that torn me apart,
there is nothing left and no one to talk,

and then, there was a flash of light,
bloomy days were bak again
she came to me and tought me love,
that stranger heart, that showed me love
for i have  lost my love and lost the hope
the stranger told me i ought to roll,


I sold my days, and left the dark,
the light was there and all was hope,
though i had nothing left and no where to go
she showed the love and showed the way,
still have nothing left, but a place to go.

-Fred (Faraz Nizamani)


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Comments:

well written, good composition, 10 thumbs up. PLease read my stuff hey why not.

Posted: Apr 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.. Looking forword to it :)

Another great piece. A great read Fred.

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

wow what a great poem.. =) gave me the sense of hope for some reason.. there are a couple of grammatical errors, but aside from that it was excellent!

Posted: Apr 27, 2008

Aww, I loved it. It kind of lifted me up some how. Eternal Night :)

Posted: May 6, 2008

fantasic

Posted: May 11, 2008

hi! fred. wonderful read. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 10, 2008



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