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Antipathy

Poem By: FunnyBunny
Poetry


How I feel about myself View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 30, 2008    Reads: 58    Comments: 9    Likes: 5   


I'm so tired of the things I've done

I'm so tired of being me

I don't want to be like this

but I can't help myself

I've let myself go and everything I believe in

You will never meet someone like me again

Nobody can be as horrible as me

So self-centered and pathetic

How can I right the wrongs?

Take back what I did?

I don't want anybody near me

In fear of being a bad influence

I'm no better than a thief, a whore, a murderer

At least they admit what they've done

I just need to get away from here

Away from myself

Where I can hurt no one

Except for me


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SimpleySplendiferous
SimpleySplendiferous

I like this poem, I wish more people who made mistakes or fucked up in the past were willing to admit what they did wrong and at least have the feeling of wanting to change it, keep being a great person

♥ Always & Forever ♥
~Ciara~

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

True. Thank you Ciara

Pratibha
Pratibha

this is a true and honest confession.
I could identify myself and the number of times i have screwed up my life.
I wish i could correct the wrongs...BUT then??

Posted: May 8, 2008

Author Comment:

I know how you feel. Once it's done, it's done. Even if you do correct it. I have to live with all my mistakes everyday and its getting the better of me, but somehow I manage to make it through each day. Good luck to you, Pratibha.

sykkeloblat

A well written poem that makes me want to kick your butt and say "Get a grip". You can't be that bad, but then we all have some dark moments.

Posted: May 9, 2008

Author Comment:

haha Yes I do have a lot of dark moments but thank you!

Lacey Cummings

Ok, this is the 2nd poem of yours I've read and I still have to disagree. You have a very difinite flair for poetry. People shine through in the words they write, and I don't for one second think you're the bad person that you felt like when you wrote this. Nice job!

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx Lacey. I wrote this when I went through a really bad time but I'm making up for it now. Thank you for reading my work.

apodiform
apodiform

wow, I absolutely love this! I'm so glad that Pratibha put this on her compilation. It's so brutally honest of those times when we are at our lowest lows and loath ourselves for what we have become. I too don't believe that you are this horrible, but I love the total honesty here. Bravo!

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for your lovely comment Apodiform.

mystory
mystory

Once again I am swept away by your writing. And I know how you feel, so you're not alone. I'm sure that everyone goes through something like this once or twice in thier lives. Beautiful poem. :)

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

I go through it everyday of my life but ah well, some things just can't be sorted. Thank you mystory.

indiefreak
indiefreak

This poem reminded me of myself too. But please don't be too hard on yourself, FunnyBunny. I like this, wonderful and provoking.

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you Indiefreak. i'll try

seesawmae
seesawmae

wow, this is really wonderful, and it's basically how i've felt once... and i think you need some change, or just to sit down and analyze your life, and see what you could do differently, and repair some of the wrongs, there's no harm in trying, and never give up on life. I believe in you, so try and believe in yourself.

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the good advise Seesawmae. i'm glad you believe in me.

Lionheart

Do i need to remind you of my own voices?
Too easy to feel this way...

Wonder why...

Dark and strong ending... kind of scary... your stupid, but i still love you hahahahahha

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Tee Hee. Thank you Lionheart. I know I'm silly but I can't help but feel this way everyday.



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