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Flowing Pain

Poem By: FunnyBunny
Poetry


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Submitted: Apr 22, 2008    Reads: 65    Comments: 7    Likes: 5   


As the cold steel punctures my flesh

My pain flows from my body

Crimson hurt mixes with my tears

The trickle soothes my anger

Hushes my rage

The gaping wound stares back at me

Blooming in it's glory of helping me

The stinging reminds me to do it again

To release the demons inside me

To open up

Bleed

Release

The damage to my soul it forever

The blade my friend, companion and helper

Every breath I breath

Wastes time

Another person's time

I escape once again to mutilating myself

Draining away the waste

I close my eyes

Opening up once again

To the pain that will never end


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Comments:

I never expected something like this to come from you...

VERY well written, it had a different feel to most poems about cutting.
A few lines that i liked especially:
"Crimson hurt mixes with my tears"
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"To release the demons inside me"
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"Draining away the waste"

And the last three lines, amazing work Funnybunny.

Posted: Apr 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Lionheart. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was kind of scared of what you would think about this. Thanks for the comment.

wow, this is really amazing!! Such a great poem, one i could relate to very very well!!!! Great job! enjoyed it a lot!

Posted: Apr 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Seesawmae.

awesome peom! It totally describes just what it's like to cut.

Posted: May 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx

Another beautiful poem, and I can relate to it so well. Great job. You're an amazing writer. :)

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the compliment Mystory!

you ahve amazing wording.

Lydia_xxxx

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Lydia

WoW, alot different then your other work, BUT beautifully written none the less, you have such a talent.

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you merrill. yeah this piece actually shocked me but it needed to be written. thanx again

That's some pretty amazing stuff...great detail and it was very captivating. Well done.

I hope you can check out some of my writing when you can spare a few mins. Take care.

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Tigerchill. I'll do so.



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