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How Could You?

Poem By: FunnyBunny
Poetry


This is just a silly little poem I wrote when I got upset. As always comments are welcome. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 5, 2007    Reads: 129    Comments: 11    Likes: 1   


How can you be like this

everytime we fight

you treat me like I'm nothing

 

My feelings don't matter to you

you think I'm a child

like I can't make decisions for myself

 

I'm not a child

I'm not your doormat

You can't walk all over me

 

I have feelings too

thoughts that are important to me

even though you don't think so

 

I just want you to love me

for who I am

and accept my individuality

 

Can't you see you are breaking me in two

making me choose between me

and you?

 

Accept me

love me

understand me

 

Can it be so hard?

 


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Comments:

lady clarissa
lady_clarissa

many people can relate to the way you have depicted this poem i for one found it a joy to read

Posted: Sep 5, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it

Eileen

Kittycat
Kittycat

I like the way you word it, and I think most of us can relate. 5 Stars!!

Posted: Sep 6, 2007

Author Comment:

Dankie Anita!

Alan Dale Dalby
Alan_Dale_Dalby

Nicely done. I'm not an expert on poetry in any way, but I did enjoy this one. I've definately been in one or two relationships were I felt this way.

Keep on writing, you've got talent!

Posted: Sep 10, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much for reading! I don't normally write poetry but hearing this from you just means so much to me.

Thank you again for reading.
Eileen

Qcontinu
Qcontinu

WOW! phenomenal work once more from a purely genius mind. Not suprisingly of course, since everything I've read coming from you so far has been top notch. The more I read your writting, the fonder I get of it. Nice job!

Posted: Sep 12, 2007

Author Comment:

I dont like fighting and this poem really helped me get rid of some anger.Thank you again for reading!

Lionheart

understanding is something hard to find, you depicted this well, good job!
it reminds me of myself in some ways....personal experiences...so easy to write about.

Posted: Sep 23, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you Lionheart. Yeah, getting people to understand you can be the hardest thing in the world and when they don't everything just seems to go wrong. Thank you for reading!

ddrandall
ddrandall

as many have said before me, I can relate to this piece... good job for sure!... write on my friend!

Posted: Oct 7, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank u ddrandall. For the read and comment.

EdwardJBradleySr
EdwardJBradleySr

FunnyBunny:

Well written and expressed emotions and feelings of being unappreciated and of frustration.

Because Booksie "blanked-out" all ratings given before October 1, 2007, I gave this an "I Like It" vote. Will do this for your other postings as well. So that your former readers will rediscover your work as will, hopefully, new Booksie members who have arrived since then.

Happy Thanksgiving and Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Nov 22, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much Ed!!!! Im in another dept at work until end of Jan 08 so i cant write so much as id like to but ill be back (in the words of Arnie)and ill continue writing - thanx for still reading and the comment.happy thanksgiving 2 u 2.

Beatrice Frost
Beatrice_Frost

Wow... It's so painfully beautiful! (In a good way ;)) I've read the Battle of Ikriam, it's beautiful, too. You are such a wonderful writer!

Posted: Feb 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx Beatrice!!! Yeah this poem really means so much to me and i'm glad u enjoyed it!! thanx for read and comment

IkutoCat
IkutoCat

Beautiful poetry. Your words can really relate to other people's emotions.

Posted: Feb 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx so much. I'm glad u enjoyed it. thanx for read & comment

XxPrincessxX
XxPrincessxX

great poem! it reminds me of my mother and I. ♥

Posted: Mar 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.

sliver
(not registered user)

i really like ur work. many people class me a freak because i love write. sometimes i don't think i'm good enough to be a writer but the people who read my work said i should get it published i write 30 pages a night but its hard writers block u no. life is always telling us that prince charming never exists but is it true. life is like a box of chos u never no what ur going to get. but u do because u bought them didn't u. i mean your 22 i'm only 17 and have been writing for 10 yrs how long have you been writing for? do u think its worth it?

Posted: Mar 16, 2008

Author Comment:

I have writer's block every single day. I've been writing for about a year now. I do think its worth it. Just keep on writing.



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