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Submitted: Aug 27, 2008 Reads: 87 Comments: 16 Likes: 5
Break away from the virtuousness
From the burdens that bind you
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Hide yourself from the oppressor
That confines your spirit
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Release the grasp the world has on you
Float among the rose petals of expectation
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Lay to rest the hurt, the anguish, the hate
Be yourself, be someone, be free
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Have faith in your judgment
You know what’s unsurpassed for you
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Be
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Helpful
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Diligent
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Delightful
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Invigorating
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Blissful
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Honorable
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But the most important of all
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BE YOU
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People will like you for who you are so dont try to fit in with the "in" crowd. I liked it FB. =)
Posted: Aug 27, 2008
Ah YES, I love it, it is so positive and uplifting
~katie
Posted: Aug 27, 2008
Where the heck did this come from? Who wrote this? Couldn't have been Lien Almighty Assassin of Men.
I'm sitting here startled. Simply startled!
Oh young love and the devious maneuvers it manipulates into such a sweet brain and loving heart like you.
Very sweet and wonderful to read Jerk.
Posted: Aug 27, 2008
I have to agree with Air on this one, it is inspirational and uplifting ;)
Nice poem, keep my posted for updates, k?
Posted: Aug 28, 2008
i loved the poem very much . great work chuckles , like my friend peachy , i wasnt expecting it , so i'm thrilled that it is so different .
terry
Posted: Aug 28, 2008
Great job! I ♥ed it! :-)
Hey, can u check out my novels whenever u have a chance? Thanks!
Posted: Aug 28, 2008
Damn it Lien, I like you. I just read your new profile and am so proud to be within your likes.
Emotions* just caught the best of me.
Posted: Aug 28, 2008
aw this is so inspirational! wonderful job :)
Posted: Aug 28, 2008
being ourselves is really important. an advice for life:) great poem, Lien:)
Posted: Aug 30, 2008
Kinda a my life moto. Be yourself, and don't care what others say/think. Great poem!
Posted: Aug 30, 2008
Yay.
Hey, that was awesome Bunny! :D
ooooohhh.... Wrap everything up that they all said and coat it with a dash of sugar and that is what this is!
Lol.
~Apple~
Posted: Aug 31, 2008
A breath of delight and optimism and thoughts to ponder after a long day. I also loved your format, I could feel the shower of rose petals.
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
Nice, very nice. Very beautiful. Optimism galore...we all need it, especially in this stone age.
Great work!
Posted: Sep 4, 2008
Very encouraging words, if only we live by them
great work!
Posted: Sep 26, 2008
All in all, very sweet, encouraging, and filled with optimism. It's like NIGHT and DAY compared to your last one i read, that one was DRIPPING with darkness, and this is practically GLOWING with goodness. I'm amazed how well you do both ends of the spectrum, alot of people can usually do one better that the other. In my opinion, both were equally good! Good job
-TDR
Posted: Nov 20, 2008
Consistent with your profile page comments. As you say, it's important to have a sense of our own identity. Thanks for sharing. Ricky.
Posted: Nov 25, 2008
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