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My New Beginning

Poem By: FunnyBunny
Poetry


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Submitted: Aug 27, 2008    Reads: 87    Comments: 16    Likes: 5   


Break away from the virtuousness

From the burdens that bind you

Hide yourself from the oppressor

That confines your spirit

Release the grasp the world has on you

Float among the rose petals of expectation

Lay to rest the hurt, the anguish, the hate

Be yourself, be someone, be free

Have faith in your judgment

You know what’s unsurpassed for you

Be

Helpful

Diligent

Delightful

Invigorating

Blissful

Honorable

But the most important of all

BE YOU


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People will like you for who you are so dont try to fit in with the "in" crowd. I liked it FB. =)

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Very True Chicka. Thank you

Ah YES, I love it, it is so positive and uplifting
~katie

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Katie

Where the heck did this come from? Who wrote this? Couldn't have been Lien Almighty Assassin of Men.

I'm sitting here startled. Simply startled!
Oh young love and the devious maneuvers it manipulates into such a sweet brain and loving heart like you.

Very sweet and wonderful to read Jerk.

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Lien Almighty Assassin of Men is still here. Deep inside. Very deep Teehee. I cannot help it. I'm in lurrrvvvveee. He melted the ice blocks of hate. Broke down the walls of deception and stole my broken heart just to mend it back together. Ahhh...*sighs*. I'll clone him and I'll send the other one to you. You deserve it you Cow.

I have to agree with Air on this one, it is inspirational and uplifting ;)
Nice poem, keep my posted for updates, k?

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Ant. I will

i loved the poem very much . great work chuckles , like my friend peachy , i wasnt expecting it , so i'm thrilled that it is so different .
terry

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha Chuckles? I like it. Maybe I should change my name to Chuckles. Yes, Its a very different poem for a very different person. I change pedals to petals...thnx Terry

Great job! I ♥ed it! :-)
Hey, can u check out my novels whenever u have a chance? Thanks!

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you jfm and will do

Damn it Lien, I like you. I just read your new profile and am so proud to be within your likes.

Emotions* just caught the best of me.

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww thank you peach. I just uploaded a pic of me! now you can see what I look like.

aw this is so inspirational! wonderful job :)

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Blackpointe

being ourselves is really important. an advice for life:) great poem, Lien:)

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Indiefreak.

Kinda a my life moto. Be yourself, and don't care what others say/think. Great poem!

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Good moto to have. thanx alek92

Yay.
Hey, that was awesome Bunny! :D

ooooohhh.... Wrap everything up that they all said and coat it with a dash of sugar and that is what this is!


Lol.

~Apple~

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww thank you apple. ur a darling

A breath of delight and optimism and thoughts to ponder after a long day. I also loved your format, I could feel the shower of rose petals.

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Anna. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Nice, very nice. Very beautiful. Optimism galore...we all need it, especially in this stone age.

Great work!

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you tigerchill

Very encouraging words, if only we live by them

great work!

Posted: Sep 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

All in all, very sweet, encouraging, and filled with optimism. It's like NIGHT and DAY compared to your last one i read, that one was DRIPPING with darkness, and this is practically GLOWING with goodness. I'm amazed how well you do both ends of the spectrum, alot of people can usually do one better that the other. In my opinion, both were equally good! Good job


-TDR

Posted: Nov 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the lovely comment TDR

Consistent with your profile page comments. As you say, it's important to have a sense of our own identity. Thanks for sharing. Ricky.

Posted: Nov 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the comment Ricky.



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