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Poem By: FunnyBunny
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The first in a Series of poems that describes what my life it like at the moment. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 30, 2008    Reads: 163    Comments: 7    Likes: 2   


The Friend who is so special

and always tried to do good

The Friend who never had anyone

who just wanted someone loyal

The Friend who never deserved my betrayal

and the hurt I caused her

The Friend who surprised me with gifts

but only received problems in return

The Friend who I want to understand

that I'm confused and sick of Life

The Friend who needs to know

I don't know which way to go

The Friend that I don't deserve

because I'm a cheat

The Friend I hope will someday see

my heart is one big, sloppy mess

The Friend who doesn't need

a jerk like me in her life

The Friend who will never understand

I only hurt everybody because that's all I am

I'm nothing more, I'm all the rest

I'm one of those people who gives Life a bad name

I'm hurting with every breath I take

But still I only think of me

It's better that I go

Leave you be

You are worthy of so much more

so much more than me.


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Comments:

... I'm not sure what to say... Obviously i don't know what it is that you have done to this friend to not deserve them. But i'm hoping its a phase that will pass for you. No one wants to be alone...

Posted: Mar 30, 2008

Author Comment:

No nobody does...life is hard...

Irwin
(not registered user)

Read these in reverse didn't spoil the trilogy and it's good that you can write these things down. None of us is perfect and we all travel similar emotional paths before we 'mature'? even though at maturity we still make mistakes but the point is most of us get there - scarred, bruised but with our humanity in tact.
Take care.

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww Thank you Irwin! Yes I've still got a long road to go before I know who I am but I'm working on it. thank you so much

interesting poem. i haven't read much of your poetry, but this poem just didnt seem that strong. the ending was alright. it seemed more like venting poetry. like your just trying to get your emotions out and it doesnt matter how good it sounds. still a good poem, just not the best. thats my own opinion. off to read more. ^^

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Alice. Yes it was a venting poem.

Hey I have friend who can relate to that but your wrong even if you think your a jerk she knows you mean to be like that, because if she didn't know you'll be like that you two wouldn't have been friends... It's like yin and yan.

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Ezzy for your comment! We did work out our problems so that's a good thing.

hey, i know how you feel!!! i've already screwed up my life, now i screw up other people too, and i feel like shit about it. but i think your friend probably understands, otherwise she wouldn't be your friend. great writing!

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! I'm glad to say we made peace and she's once again my friend.

Great poem. I like how you express your feelings. I could relate to it very well. God bless you and your friendship.

Posted: May 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww, thank you Indiefreak!

This was really good. Like it totally reminds me of my strange life, kinda of makes me sad. (Because its good! ^^ hahahaha) This poem totally describes how I am sometimes. Such a great poem. [= Loved it.

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you



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