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The Hallway of Unspoken Words

Poem By: FunnyBunny
Poetry


Another weird poem and the first one in a while. I'd love to know what you guys think about this one View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 13, 2008    Reads: 67    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


Unspoken words leap from the stone cold walls

Waiting for someone, anyone to hear their reverberation  

 

Unheard shrieks cry from the bricks

Craving for ears to hear, hearts to heed

 

Voices of the unloved, the forsaken and the departed

Fight with each other, demanding attention

 

Not a soul is taking note, they just pass by

Unaware of the plights of the lost   


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Veronika decides to die.
until a young man holds her hand.

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Huh?

Peach, I'm confused.......zing zing zing

OUTSTANDING poetry Lien.

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Cow. I have serious writers block so I haven't been writing much but will make up for it asap. I hope you've been keeping well.

wonderful poetry , very sad but very touching ,
terry

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you terry. glad you enjoyed it

i liked it....it was sad and heartfelt...in a weird sort of way, but dont get me wrong, i love weird :)

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

I love weird 2. thank you victoria

Wow, that was haunting! Loved it, I think I would run down that hall~coward like! Ahhh!
I saw a dirty hall, with dim lighting and scribbles along it in different colors, like: 'So and so loves so and so' or 'Such and such was here' type of writing. Ghosts haunting the place; as if voices of students in a hall, or a night club where people wrote on the wall....not sure, but I like'd it. ;)
~rain

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

You've got the right idea rain! But I couldn't find a picture that would compliment the poem.
thanx



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