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The Hunter...

Poem By: FunnyBunny
Poetry


The third in a Series of Poems describing what's going on in my life at the moment. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 30, 2008    Reads: 59    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


Like a scared animal

I peek around the bush

looking at you

The Hunter

I know I shoudn't go closer

but something about you

draws me near

luring me in

Nothing good can come of this

but still you persist

and the weak person that I am

cannot resist the temptation

The consequences will be devastating

I cannot trust myself

It doesn't matter what the price

I still want to be near you

I walk closer away from safety

closer to the unknown

My beats a thousand miles per hour

My breathing shallow

The thought of you makes my skin tingle

I cannot wait for your touch

The way you laugh and make me smile

I cannot wait to be your Trophy

The closer I get, the more I yearn for you

but I know it's forbidden

All I want is to be loved, to be needed

and I know you will make it come true

But between us is a fence

A fence to protect us from each other

from ourselves

but still we go dangerously close

The Hunter looks at me, the prized one

Questions in The Hunter's eyes

I know the answer I want to give

but I also know the answer that's right

I walk away from the Hunter, my heart in pieces

I look back, only to find

The Hunter

with tears in his eyes


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Comments:

Never be afraid to be close to someone. Dont walk away from dear ones. This coming from a 15 year old. It's so sad this poem. I didnt comment the others but I did read them. I'm sorry for whatever is going on. And I really hope it gets better. =) Mandy

Posted: Mar 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Mandy. You're a very bright 15 year old haha. thanx again.

Irwin
(not registered user)

It makes me think of the Stones' number 'You can't always get what you want'. We all want the unreachable, the dangerous, the forbidden, it's in our nature.

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

You have no Idea who right you are! Thanx Irwin

hm out of the series i like this one the best so far. i think theres one more to still read. great, but sad poem.

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for your comment Alice

hey, i feel really sorry for you, it's like hell, as i said before, the exact thing is happening to me. I hope you can stay strong and get through it!

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx and I hope everything works out for you!



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