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The Princess

Poem By: FunnyBunny
Poetry


Written for my best friend View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 1, 2008    Reads: 47    Comments: 10    Likes: 2   


The Princess lies in her soft, warm bed

Her milky skin being kissed by the sun

She dreams of Princes and Fairy Tale Love

Her dreams filled with red rose pedals

But inside, her wounded heart cries out

The pain inflicted too great to bear

Oh how I wish I could heal her wounds

Comfort her heart and sooth her soul

Her auburn hair covers her pillow

Flowing like a waterfall

She turns and sways in her sleep

Nightmares taking control of her mind

Yearning for the Prince to save her

And sweep her up in his strong arms

If only she could see herself through my eyes

Gentle, loving, caring and honest

The love that she gives is selfless

Giving all she has to others

The Princess awakes to the beautiful morning

And stands by the window looking at The Lord’s work

And even in the storm of her life

She still sees the magnificent beauty

It won’t be long now, Princess

Before your Prince arrives

Sweeping you off your feet

And making you a Queen

Just hold on and be the person that you are

For that is enough for all of us


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Comments:

:O LOVE IT!!
This is FANTASTIC!!!

Now when are you gonna finish BFI?!?!?

Posted: May 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Apple. I'm working on it, I promise. I started with the new chapter but I've got SERIOUS writers block. I don't really know where to go with the story. Honestly, I'm dumbstruck. Would you mind checking out my other poems? I'd love to know what you think. Thanx again for the comment and read.

I love this poem its wonderful whoever this auburn haired girl is seems like a real kind hearted soul I see you admire her rather she is true or false it is nice to know you connect with your characters as well. Can't wait to see more keep doing a great job

♥ Always & Forever ♥
~Ciara~

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

This poem was written for my best friend and flat mate, Sarita. yes, shes very kind and sweet. Thank you Ciara

Strange, now I want to kick her butt and say the same thing, or maybe to get her closer to earth ans real life. But the prose was beautiful, and I really felt your friend when I read this piece.

Posted: May 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Sykkeloblat! Please dont kick my butt!!

Do you realize how intensely incredible those last 2 lines are? Do you? Do you? (voice influx).

I hope you shared this with her, awesome writing....

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Classy Peach. Yes i did share with her. Im glad you liked it.

That was beautiful! i'm sure that made your friend feel special...isn't this how all of us girls feel sometimes??? Great job! Bravo!

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes it is. Thank you

This was so sweet! Your friend is a lucky girl to have you write such a beautiful poem for her :)

Stephanee

Posted: May 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Stephanee. She's a great person.

wow, this is wonderful, and your friend is really lucky to have you write an amazing poem for her! great job!

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm lucky to have her! thank you Seesawmae

Im going to pretend i am a girl:

'AAAAWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!'


..... now im me again...

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

haHaHaHAHAHAhAHAhAHa you nut. thanx lionheart. I thought you forgot about me...

wow! i love it, its great!!

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Sonia

that was really beautiful.

=]


also. please check out my new piece Slavery Today

Posted: Aug 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. Will do.



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