I cannot see
Your jealousy shuts my eyes
I cannot think
Your rage consumes my thoughts
I cannot be
You control my life
Have I really been born alive
just to die because of you?
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THE SEESAWMAE CHALLENGE!!!! - Free Me
Poem By: FunnyBunny
Poetry
Written for the Seesawmae Challenge
I hate men who abuse women just so they can feel like men.
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Submitted: May 28, 2008 Reads: 54 Comments: 6 Likes: 4
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Cool. Check my "challenge" poem.
Posted: May 28, 2008
Very Very Good. You leave us many options to ponder how we can relate this to ourselves, and this can be interpreted in many organizations of imaginations.
spirituality*
parent/child relationship*
lovers*
careers (or wrong careers)*
friendship*
addictions*
obsessions*
Great use of your vivid mind Lien.
Posted: May 29, 2008
Great read FunnyBunny! Powerful!
so is this the challenge where she sends you a picture and you draw a poem out of it?
Posted: May 29, 2008
This poem is so beautiful. It is bold makes a statement.
Posted: May 31, 2008
Very intense! And you nailed right on the er, nose?? I, too have been through some abusive relationships, and swore off men....
Yeah, I got a man now. My first words on our second date was, "Don't hit me, don't hit my kids, and don't mess with my food. With that out of the way, we should be fine."
MA
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
this is so great!!! you did this amazing, such a great interpretation of the picture1 i'm very impressed!! can i post this in the novel on my page??
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
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