Why are you attracting liars? What is in that sweet adorable brilliant and beautiful mind that is attracting liars? What is seducing your soul to believe words rather than actions? When will the moment hit home that you need to be true to yourself and be kind to yourself and pamper your highly intellectual inner sanctuary to calm the waves of barf-like liars and attract men that make your heart sing. Why would you let the actions of past relationships halt a new one before it even has the chance to reach the starting line. Smack that pony in the ass and hold your sword high as you battle cry onto the horizon to find love yet again. Like this: ex: Smack! Swoooosh (the sword)....aye yai yai yai yai yai yai yai. Xena style.

Of course, this is aimed at you if this were auto-biographical.

I'll let you hate, but not for long.

Also, great poetry! Raw sugar cane on my tongue. Keep up the awesome writing over in South Africa.....

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

BTW...and most importantly the three word lie in this poem is: cough cough...hand me a microphone so I can use an echo effect.....


the three word lie is: Not From Anyone.
zing.

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

Well, what a you think
She just grab for the money
the Chips and Dales
or the plas dick?

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Great poem. Anyone who's lying to u they don't realize what they're missing

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

You're wonderful. Don't let men break u

Posted: Jun 4, 2008