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Submitted: Jan 19, 2008 Reads: 601 Comments: 29 Likes: 11
The Music of My Heart
by Gerard Lebel
You strummed
my heartstrings
knowing unequivocally
how easily
they can be broken,
encouraging
our new love song
to be born.
I lingered,
listening to the music
of my heart,
wrapping
you in its melody
once again,
yearning
for your whispers of love
long past the moment of no return.
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Wonderful! I could actaully feel the true sting of your poem!..check out my profile some time ~Twilight
Posted: Jan 19, 2008
Very nice Jerry. Good form and flows nicely. Like the sentiments.
Posted: Jan 19, 2008
Great peice of work again Jerry
Regards Brian
Posted: Jan 19, 2008
I really like this Jerry! I can't pick out one line I liked best cause the whole entirety was excellence! so I also liked the ending 'yearning for your whispers of love long past the moment of no return'
Happy Weekend*********katie ;)
Posted: Jan 19, 2008
Beautiful. I can sing it on a party.
Posted: Jan 19, 2008
Jerry just signed in and what a great poem to read first...."Listenig to the music of my heart" such wonderfull words....Great start to my everning thankyou Juliet
Posted: Jan 19, 2008
Very touching piece! It even SOUNDS a lot like music!
Posted: Jan 19, 2008
Lovely!!!
Posted: Jan 20, 2008
Hi Ger,
I pondered on 'unequivicably' for a while; then thought -yes - those who love us understand our fragility.
Posted: Jan 20, 2008
Dear Gerabel,
Old love never dies
Your heartstrings vibrate
To a wonderful melody,
The melody of your heart.
It's a heart that's fragile,
Fot its been broken many times.
And yet does love linger,
In your ears
And in your heart.
Old love never dies.
Sincerely,
Satis
Posted: Jan 20, 2008
Oops! Please read not "Fot" but "For" above.
Regards,
Satis
Posted: Jan 20, 2008
Beautifully written. Good work Jerry!
Posted: Jan 20, 2008
Beautiful. Love IS in the air.
Posted: Jan 21, 2008
A lovely way of putting things "I lingered" - that's it isn't it? when someone you loves decides to go? We linger - not ready to accept - Very nicely put Jerry -
Posted: Jan 21, 2008
Very beautiful. I don't wait for Valentine's Day to tell people how much I love them!! I think this would be beautiful on a Hallmark card, or something. . . . Hmmmm, what an intersting idea: You could make up your own cards!! Ever thought of that?
MA
Posted: Jan 21, 2008
Writings, such as this, are why I come here...
"Blessed Be" and thank you for posting...
JoKa (Evelyn)
Posted: Jan 21, 2008
But isn't that how we all fall in love, so cautious, so careful yet so foolish in the end and letting go to take hold of something worth the risk. Flawless!
Posted: Jan 21, 2008
this is soo nice i really like it! you make love sound so easy to get and so easy to lose
Posted: Jan 21, 2008
beautiful poem! brilliant idea to tie music to love! :)
catcherbabe34
Posted: Jan 22, 2008
Wow..yet another amazing poem.
This was beautiful. My fav =]
*Mandy
Posted: Jan 24, 2008
The sound of love is greater than any drama queen for sure!!!
There is a reason we "endure" love, because like you said we recognize the frailty of being alone, when we have someone to lean on they lean on us as well. Loved it. :D
Once someone played my tune but i played theirs badly and i think i snapped a string... but all past aside, i hope to never love unless i know for sure that i can play them a song.
Posted: Jan 24, 2008
This Poem was beautiful!!!
Posted: Jan 27, 2008
WOW! beauiful piece.. you have really interpreted the language of love...i will be sure to read more of your pieces!
If you get a spare min please chech out ome of my short stories and leave a little critism!
Thanks
:)
Posted: Feb 1, 2008
Such great emotions of love.......really beautifull read.......til later juliet
Posted: Feb 14, 2008
"moment of no return"
touched my heart and soul as well....so cute....
where was i sleeping for so long.....
Posted: May 21, 2008
Well, I came back and re-read this one and had to comment again! It's just absolutely beautiful. What a romantic you are!
MA
Posted: May 22, 2008
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