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Far Away

Poem By: girlish
Poetry


Reflecting on a loss lover that couldn't decide what they wanted. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 6, 2007    Reads: 37    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Somewhere at the end of the tunnel,

I'll wait for you to come.

Somewhere under the rainbow,

Your marriage has just begun.

Somehow under the blue,blue skies,

Your telepathic sensors will find.

Someday I will see your face,

Reflect on the ocean.

If only in my mind.

Missing you is a whole lot harder,

Then I ever thought it could be.

It's my fault I turned you loose,

Said you wanted to be free.

I couldn't gamble and take a chance,

That you might change your mind.

I really didn't think anything would change,

Even if we gave it time.

But all I know I'm missing you,

I hope this poem will find.

That you are happy and doing well,

They say that love is blind.

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Comments:

very nice-I like the first eight, nine verses the best. there is so much beauty in those lines. at first I thought this was someone who had passed on, until the rest explained. great piece--I hope he hears your thoughts-:)

Posted: Aug 6, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you air for your nice and kind words.Isn't it funny how life works?One day life is one way the next totally different.
girlish



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