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Oceans Internal Cleansing

Poem By: girlish
Poetry


This poem states how my soul is cleansed when I go to the beach and sit and my mind intwines with the ocean. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 27, 2007    Reads: 61    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


I remember thinking to myself,

The starry skies and the cool breeze.

Was all i needed to feel free!

The hot white sand the beaches erosion,

makes my hear jump like an explosion!

The seagulls pass as the child runs by,

while the jellyfish wait to hear my cry!

The pier stands tall as the fishermen call,

proud of their catch as their stories spread to all.

Swimmers swim at their own risk,as the salt burns their eyes,

as they look at the fish!

Surfing the waves so free,without noticing as they crept up to me.

If I had a problem before I arrived,

the problem had left I was healed inside!


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Comments:

It was beautiful-the simplest things in life can always be something to appreciate .

Posted: Aug 1, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you for you encouraging remarks.

Man I love this one makes me Homesick for Florida

Posted: Sep 30, 2007

Author Comment:

Florida is waiting for you:P:Come on!Thanks for your comments:P:
girlish

Nice one -- I hope you get this --- I just had 2 comments meant for someone else ?????????????

Posted: Oct 1, 2007

Author Comment:

I did my friend and thank you for your kind remarks.
girlish



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