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Sweet Surrender....

Poetry By: GuiltyPleasure

Tags: Love

The tender side again...


and the fear of losing...

Submitted:Jul 1, 2012    Reads: 102    Comments: 42    Likes: 13   

Sweet Surrender

For one brief moment,

Let your hand be my bracelet..

Are you afraid of the sparks!!!

Yes, they are real, made of real fire

Oh then let me first..put you in a trance…


My heart is not in the place it should be

In fact, it doesn't even live in this world anymore

So, people please stop knocking… at this locked door

Its owner is a wandering hermit, who left it tight closed



Let me.. let me look in your deep, awakened eyes

Though it will sure make me suddenly want to die

With pleasure unbearable… all pulsing wild

Won't you ever give me this moment of my life!


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