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Poem By: Heavinley Hano
Poetry


Tags: love.

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Submitted: Mar 3, 2007    Reads: 97    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


As i gaze upon my days

and all my wicked ways.

I came to realise for it was not in vain.

For you see my heart remained:

Untouched,unused,

sort of like a virgin.

To you i gave the honour to touch

me for the first time.

I am no knight in shining armour.

Nor do i have a white horse.

But i give you my key the secret to my taughts.

So stay you and do the things you do...

and i will be the man forever loving you.


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Fantastic. It has a superb rhythm that just glides and makes it so readable. Well done.

Posted: Mar 3, 2007

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Thank you.

I like it! The lines are direct and to the point, good job!

Posted: Mar 3, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you.

To keep your dignity through troubled times. Very good.

Posted: Mar 3, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you.



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