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One rose still standing

Poetry By: HiKitty
Poetry



ummm... I don't know if this is good or crap, so please read and comment you honest opinion :/
Its about finding hope when all is gone, and finding your strength. Well it's about a rose surrounded by dead flowers but.... just read :)


Submitted:Apr 7, 2013    Reads: 30    Comments: 6    Likes: 3   


A sweet delicate rose

Towers closer into view

The sweet honey fragrance of warmth and dew

Enrichens my head to toes

The vibrations of floral glare

Dampen me with passion

It's buzzed an excitement as I clash on

Soft buckets of dirt light and fair

Shun out of this woeful world

Lies the poor tethered soldiers

Who fought the blazing suns armours

Fumed out black and rivetly curled

As this blanket of crystal dark sorrow

Suffocates the mind from light

An overlooked seed, miniscule from sight

Ribbons viscously, past mindless foes

Into this sweet delicate rose

Overtaken the perished dim fragments

Of deceased petals, cull, abandonments

That scatter terrains, as the gust promptly blows





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