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A Bloody War

Poetry By: Hinoglue

In a far away land there is war...

Submitted:Aug 5, 2011    Reads: 171    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   

In a far away land there is war,
Filled with bllod, blood and gore,
People's heads littered on the floor,
They are crying, 'Oh please no more!'

No matter how much they plea,
The warriors simply cannot flee,
They are not people who are free,
Both teams never will agree.

I also have this other part but I don't know if it's good or not. Please comment and tell me if you like it so I know if I should include it in future posts on other sites. Thanks!

Where the war took place,
People were seperated by race,
It was a wold without grace,
They always have to brace,

The reason why they do fight,
Is because each of them thing they're right,
They clash and clash with all their might,
Each side is filled with smite.


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