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I'm the Girl

Poem By: Holden Caulfield
Poetry


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a poem about loosing yourself View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 4, 2008    Reads: 37    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


I’m the girl you never noticed
I’m the girl you wouldn’t remember
I’m the girl who needs you to care
I’m the girl who will wait forever
I’m the girl who is always last
I’m the girl who is falling apart
I’m the girl who is loosing grip
I’m the girl who has the broken heart
I’m the girl with the tear stained pillow
I’m the girl whose blood mixes with her tears
I’m the girl who is in love with you
I’m the girl who’s weaker than she appears
I’m the girl who will never tell you
I’m the girl who is afraid to say goodbye
I’m the girl who thinks you are beautiful
I’m the girl who needs someone to see her cry
I’m the girl who is afraid of you
I’m the girl who needs to wipe her tears
I’m the girl who is afraid of herself
I’m the girl who needs to conquer her fears
I’m the girl who is loosing you
I’m the girl who needs someone to save her
I’m the girl who is loving you
I’m the girl who is loosing her savoir
I’m the girl who has lost all her hope
I’m the girl who will always be alone
I’m the girl who won’t ever blame you
I’m the girl who will never feel at home
I’m the girl you forgot again
I’m the girl who hates to see you go
I’m the girl who waits for you
I’m the girl you’ll never really know
I’m the girl wondering how to fix this
I’m the girl you barely have a minute for
I’m the girl you are going to let down
I’m the girl who can’t handle this anymore
I’m the girl who dreams of being in your arms
I’m the girl who just wants to feel whole again
I’m the girl you said you would never hurt
I’m the girl who needs you more than anything
I’m the girl who can hardly love herself
I’m the girl who has forgotten the feeling of laughter
I’m the girl who will always wonder why
I’m the girl who is such an undeniable disaster


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Comments:

This girl is kinda depressed, and lots of girls are, or maybe this is about a lots of girls, as many as there are lines in this poem, or maybe it's about all those girls that fit the description given in each line. The possibilities are endless.

I like the style too, beginning each line with those same words.

Really cool!

Posted: May 4, 2008



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