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Just a poem I wrote! All comments welcom please!!

Submitted:Oct 24, 2011    Reads: 44    Comments: 12    Likes: 5   

Dark soul

Creeping up on me

No more light

No more happiness

Your dark soul

Sucks the life out of everything

No shred of light

None where you are

wrenching heart's from chests

Leaving only holes

Gaping holes

nothing there

Your trail of dark souls

Left behind

No heart

No soul

No life

All because of you

I have no soul

I have no heart

Just a hole

A gaping hole



I need help


I can not live

You can not live

Not with out a soul

And you have ripped ours out

No more soul for us

No more happiness for us

No more life for us

Help us

Help us

Hey I would love any comments you have! Good or bad! They will all help me as an author and poet so please comment!!!!


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