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Hide and Seek, Litte Miss Sunshine

Poem By: Hugs and kisses
Poetry


*cough* well this is...depressing... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 13, 2008    Reads: 40    Comments: 7    Likes: 4   


The hyper girl, that’s what they call me,

Bubbly, laughing, always smiling,

Little did they know, it’s all they see,

There’s more, more that’s just hiding,

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Maybe I should show them, just a peek,
After all,

There’s more to life than hide and seek,

What happens when we fall?

Nothing, that’s what will happen,

People are still looking, still seeking,

They’ll find you broken and misshapen

They’ll find you ugly and screaming,

By then it will be too late to save you,

It’ll be too late to here you laugh again,

By then your frozen blood would be blue,

You’ll be as good as gone, by then,

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You think I’m just smiles and kittens,

I think they’re kittens that tear me up,

And fake plastic smiles that never end,

Bubbly laughing and always smiling?

Try frightened, lost and hiding,

Look a little deeper I’m sure you’ll find,

The real Little Miss Sunshine.


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Comments:

oh noes. that is sad. but great job.

L ♥

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww thanks! I'm glad you liked it, even it it was sad.

This was a sad, but i LOVED it anyway, it's a really great poem! :)

Music is a necessity. Get used to it.

~angelgirl

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you loved it! Thank you so much ^.^

I agree, sad to a level, but we all have that deeper darker, broken side of us. It was a nice hange for you to show us the depth of that side. But no matter what you're still hugs and kisses to me;) and when you don't feel like that person, I'm still here for you. If you ever need anything I'm there, hehe. You're booksie friend, lmao:P
Great poem me belle
Steph(:

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Awwww that's really sweet, I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I totally agree, there's always a side of ourselves that are sort of just for yourself. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem and for leaving such a great comment. XOXO, Hugs and Kisses

and why is Princess sad...I am praying that this phase will pass too for each and every soul who faces this situation and we all face this situation more than once in our lifetime...

this is such a sad poem indeed.

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww thank you. Yes, I am much less sad, I just really upset for some reason or another a few days ago, hence this poem. Thank you so much for a lovely comment and nice advice ^.^

I was just about to write something... depressing... so now i think im in the right mood... haha?

Its true, to every shining moon there is a dark side. I guess some people choose to smile for others. Let them have one less worry... or at least thats what i do.
Different to what im used to from you. I kind of read it as 'becoming' what you have always 'been'. Sometimes we dont even know we're lying to others and ourselves. I dont know whether its better to know or not... but i guess knowing has no illusions.
Keep smiling. That plastic mask holds the secrets that we shouldnt know. We all have masks. Imagine the amount of chaos that would follow should everyone take off the masks at once?!
There is a reason for everything, its meaning is hidden until it finds reason to reveal itself.

Interesting piece hugs and kisses. I dont need to reiterate the fact that people are gathered here from all over the world to hear that your doing good. :)

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

That is one of the sweetest comments I've ever had. Thank you so much. I'm really, really glad you liked my poem, because it's very honest I guess. Truthfully, I normally am very happy and bouncy, but what I really hate is when people think that somehow I'm like that all the time, I am not. So yup. I'm really happy you enjoyed it, and that you left such a long lovely comment, so thank you so so much ^.^

hahahaha you have a picture of barbie for the poem! but i think thats actually a great choice b/c shes little miss sunshine always smiling and thought to be cheerful - but then you throw this new point of vew at us. what if she's not really happy behind that smile?
using barbie here as the subject, but the poem is applied to anyone and everyone. we all have this deeper and a darker side to us.
and you demonstrated it brilliantly in this poem :)
excellent writing hugs and kisses!

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

I thought that putting barbie as the picture was a pretty good idea ^.^ I'm really happy you liked it so much and you also liked my barbie picture. lol.

Sure this is sad, but it's real. I don't know anyone who isn't like this at one point of their lives...The Barbie is a good idea, cliched example of "plastic". I'm just kind of rambling on, so I'll stop, but my point is don't be ashamed if its sad or depressing, if it's real, its good, that's all there is to it!

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. The comment is all nice and nice like so I'm happy ^.^



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