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Oh So Fine

Poem By: Hyde
Poetry


Regrets .... Watch as a friend goes from a thunbs up, to a thumbs down. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 20, 2008    Reads: 55    Comments: 0    Likes: 1   


Cut it open like a dime,
Oh how you wish it was all so fine.
 Cherish it while you last, no ending,
no bending, no cutting ,no  fighting the shine,
Oh how you wish it was all so fine.
 Try to make it while you can
 you wish you never did this,
Try to make it go away,
 You lie and you try and make me cry, think of how you made it so high
You came falling, crashing and tripping down
Now look you'll probably drown.
 Oh how you wish it was all so fine,
You'd probably live for only a such time.
Make me the bad guy I don't mind,
But remember, I'm the not one,
Livin' a lie.
Oh how you wish it was all so fine.


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