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Submitted: Jul 7, 2008 Reads: 36 Comments: 2 Likes: 1
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This is really great,and a bit dark.I like it.You wrote one really great poem! :)
Posted: Jul 8, 2008
Critically speaking, it was a very good poem. The feeling, the emotion, the flow, imagery, word choice, cadence, all very well done.
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
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