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My Scar

Poem By: IcyDibs402
Poetry


Tags: poetry

I wrote this poem because someone made a very dumb decision in his life and now that I look back upon this, I think how dumb it was of me to write about this, but I also think about how this relates to so many more things now. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 1, 2008    Reads: 68    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


You act like nothing happened,
but in your heart,
you know i know,
you know you messed up,
You turn to look at me,
like you didnt do anything,
all ill do is turn away,
shed a tear,
and my beats will no longer,
no longer sing,
and you will grab my shoulder,
and ill shrug it off,
you'll wonder what you did wrong,
and when i turn back to you,
still shedding tears,
you will walk away like i thought you would,
i knew it,
i knew i shouldnt have looked into your eyes,
but i did,
and i still love you,
but now that you messed up your life,
and you look back at me,
without a smile that i loved,
without a heart i once heard,
but with a mistake that you took,
and while my heart bleeds,
and while the steps you take fade,
i find reason to live on,
with a scar engraved,
i find reason to love again.....
-IcyDibs402


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Comments:

hi! dibs. the strength of this poem is it ends on a positive note. u've realised with a scarred life too, u'll move on. and that's great. lovely. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Bubbly!

hi..I liked this one a lot. I can relate myself a lot to this one.
Life goes on...so move on.:-)

Take care my friend^_^

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

lol Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked it!



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