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Submitted: Sep 2, 2008 Reads: 37 Comments: 12 Likes: 6
I thank you dearly.
From the bottem of my heart.
You helped me though this,
As I broke apart.
You stayed by me.
As I died inside.
Gave me advice.
Stood by my side.
You didint give up.
Never gave in.
Just gave me confort,
From his painful sin.
So thanks again.
You were so kind.
Im so very happy.
You cleared my mind.
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awwww, that's so sweet...you're a great poet!!!
x3
i wish i poetry skills...but i'm lacking majorly there :3
either way....great job...such a happy feelilng ^-^
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
Wow! I know exactly what you mean by this. It sounds similar to the other one but thats okay. When you get in the mode, certain words pop out to you, and you use them repeativly. It's okay, ALOT of my poetry sounds very alike cause I wrote some of it in the same time. I love it!! ^o^ Keep writing Iggy!!
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
OH MY GOD IT'S SOOOO GOOD!!! My poetry got 72th place in my schools constest........Who's it to?
Posted: Sep 3, 2008
Awwwww Gaby thats what best friends are for! I know you'd do the same for me! We've gotta have eachothers backs when we're down!^^ You know A great woman once told me "A man once met a guine and wished that he was the smartest, kindess person in the world, so then the guine tured him into a woman." I know that was kinda random but it was boy related so I thought I'd tell you....^^
Posted: Sep 3, 2008
Oh I figured out that I wasn't the person who helped you....I just thought that scence I was trying to help you thats what it was about......but I was wrong then I kinda broke-down because it hurt but....What ever! it was to somone elce who helped you more than I did I'm sure they apperciate it alot! Sorry I didn't help you more in your time of need...I thought I did but.......Okay no more of Tree's thoughts and pains!
-Tree
Posted: Sep 3, 2008
your welcome...
Posted: Sep 3, 2008
HORAY!!! Your welcome but hey...Thats what bestfriends are for! you spelled "sorry" soory like I do!!! THE TRAIT HAS BEEN PASSED!! :D and I should have know you were thankful I'M soory......
Posted: Sep 4, 2008
COOL EVERY ONES HAPPY!!!!! HORAY!!!!!!!!
Posted: Sep 4, 2008
WHO?!?! Mr."ANONOMYOUS"?!?!
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
oh, wait wich one lil' Jeffy from texas who moved away or the other one ?
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
U r a great poet and a good friend, if u make a poem 'bout dat particular friend.
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
Awesome, thats awesome!
Posted: Sep 15, 2008
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