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My first poem ever. Its about a guy I know and love. View table of contents...
Submitted: Sep 2, 2008 Reads: 45 Comments: 9 Likes: 3
I know your pain.
I feel it too.
That look in your eyes.
It just tares me in two.
You just cant help...
To take it out on me.
Im the only one around.
But cant you see?
I love you deeply.
With all my heart.
And the way you act...
Just brakes me apart...
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Its shrot, I know. And my first poem ever. I just hope my friend can read it.
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
some speeling errors. Sorry.
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
hehe, it was good nonetheless!
i lieked it muchly
XD
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
It was sweet. I just wrote 2 poems recently about being torn apart.....weird...^-^ I still likes it!!
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
I'll get some tape if you need to put your self together ^U^ sorry natural thing it's good!!!
Posted: Sep 3, 2008
*hug back* Your welcome!
Posted: Sep 4, 2008
awwz its sadical!
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
So hurtful, but good.
reminds me of 7 things by miley cyrus.
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
LAL, itz not really a shock if u dont. But im tired of seeing her face at EVERY store i go 2. I only like her songs 2 tell da truth.
Posted: Sep 7, 2008
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