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Again, about a guy I love. Sorry if I seem depresed. I kinda am. View table of contents...
Submitted: Sep 3, 2008 Reads: 50 Comments: 7 Likes: 4
My arms wraped around you.
You held me tight.
I needed protection,
On that cold, dark night.
My eyes filled with tears,
You brushed them away,
I asked you quietly,
Will you stay?
You said you would.
But where are you now?
I sit here alone,
and wonder how...
Could I trust you?
You left me here.
I love you, I miss you
I need you near.
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i like this one.
i can feel the intensity flowing from the words.
and it makes me sad...
good poem tho...
^^
btw u forgot to tell me that u posted two new gazers. (which i really liked...)
Posted: Sep 3, 2008
Nice and depressing, but thats how it is for every one right now it's hard. Wow that was a sencire moment for me! I wasn't abnoxious at all.......it was good!
-Tree
Posted: Sep 3, 2008
Thank you I've been trying very very very very VERY hard
Posted: Sep 4, 2008
o.0 he left you!? That is depressing. That emotion of longing for his embrace. Oh how I know what thats like..(but we don't speak of those things...esp about me ^-^) I do love it though. I'm adding it to my reading list!
Posted: Sep 4, 2008
ahhhh, You meanie you made me sad now I need a hug!
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
Sad, but again deep.
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
oops i just reread this....
Posted: Sep 19, 2008
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