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Disillusion - A freeing or a being freed from illusion or conviction; disenchantment.

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Submitted: May 7, 2009    Reads: 130    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


Disillusion

I fight wars without weapons

I fight battles without remorse

I punch and scrach

When I feel there is no way out

I have a twitch

i-----it makes me f---feel better

I wrote a theif a letter

He stole it, man I should have known better

I took a pill, thought it would make me better

I lost my mind, while I was too busy trying to find unlimited time


I fight wars without weapons

My mind helped me win

Down on my knees not sucking but contemplating his fate

I scream out his name, as the knife comes down

For I am the bringer of pain

A vampire through the mist

A fate for the men that can't resist my poison kiss

I fly through the night, the next victim in my sight.


I fight battles without remorse

I ride on a pale horse

Hands in the air not giving up but contemplating the fate of the human race

I scream out, as fire scorches the earth

For I am the bringer of suffering

A god through the clouds

A fate for the sinners of the world

I puch through thee clouds, snuff out all life


I feel all the pain, all the suffering

I take it in and store it all in my congested mind

Just waiting for the right time

I will shine bright you will see

I have been everything that I can be

Everything you wanted me to be

You were nothing but the time

The time I needed to have

Time was all I needed from you

I refuse to admit, it was me

The total bitch

I'm not crazy

I do n----not have a tw-----twitch

I remember the hugs, the sweet words of love

The sweet sounds of a heart breaking

You were the sucker, the one I loved to hurt

I was mean to you, why do you still love me

Having you was just a game to me


A heartbreaker, that's me

A lover, could never be

A bitch, obsurd

Welcome to my life

My name i-----is

Disillusion

Written By (Disillusion) I mean (Hope Sanders)

 


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Comments:

I have read this a few times now "as usual" Looking at this from different angles and views. I gave up trying to work it out BUT I liked the poem and the flow was good.

Posted: May 11, 2009

Author Comment:

Yeah well to be honest I can't find the words to tell you what it is about myself. ;)
But thanks for reading as always Brian.
Also I'm glad you liked it.

(H.S.)

A heartbreaker, that's me

A lover, could never be

A bitch, obsurd

Welcome to my life

My name i-----is

Disillusion

This is someting which even the most articulate and emancipated will shy away from - the love that dare not speak its name - these things need enunciation in a forthright way knowing all of the imponderables, even if these most tender and intense on emotions so deep in all of us need expression such as the poem insinuates in the consiense ; otherwise our approach is prudish. the poem speaks without inhibitions of strictness which forbid the freedom of thought and is to be lauded for its brave confrontation with these issues
It is tendentious and insightful ; brittle and broken in parts by turn
Much thought and passion went into writing this poem
Well done
LOL

(*-*)
S
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Posted: May 13, 2009

Author Comment:

Thanks for you wonderful comment and for reading my work form my confusing mind :)

(H.S.)

Woa.. that was great i really loved this

Posted: May 13, 2009

Author Comment:

thank you for reading it.

(H.S.)



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