I like, It is very short, is there a possibility of maybe lengthing it? Or even condensing it to three lines to test you?
Just a thought! :)

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

hi! simone. this is the truth - DEATH THE LEVELLER. do anything in this world, call urself a king or a beggar but finally all go to soil and death equals them all. it is poetic justice in a deadly way.

an intensely realistic poem. keep it up. and let it remain this way. for the meaning is loud and clear. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Hiya LUNA, i do wonder sometimes, you r such a warm person...sensitive....so very true...

and i am sure our worth is realised only after our death...

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Indie, sorry I really struggle to read people's novels right now - maybe one day.
However I love to peruse people's poetry and I thought this was written like a very wise fable or proverb. In God's eyes everyone is the same - something we find it hard to come to terms with, and all who repent are forgiven. I think God's power to forgive is sometimes forgotten.
Whoops! I am getting carried away here but I liked your simple, truthful poem.

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Hi Luna,

I have read your poem and comment also.

hey, if person understand this naked truth about life,
i think angle of living a life may be changed.

You have said something great about life in very short words good effort.

thanks again

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

Hey indie :) I love short poems like this, especially from very talented writers! This one says so much about your beliefs on life and even social equality. You really have a lot of talent :) Take care, Regan

Posted: Aug 3, 2008

I always thought before God we all are equal. You have proven it through this poem.

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Good poem.........It speak about the unity of people in death............We should be united while we are alive..........

Posted: Nov 13, 2008