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Submitted: May 13, 2008 Reads: 88 Comments: 10 Likes: 5
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hi! if. is this about orange and u. tell me, tell me. during my school days, i had a best friend who was a quiet shy girl and i was the dominant bossy type. she'd do everything i asked. now when i look back, i can't believe i was like that. somewhere it strikes a chord when i read ur poem. indeed, memorable. ;-)
Posted: May 14, 2008
Wow...I'm the bossy one right?U r the one that I always bully...hahhhhaaaaa...I won't forget that...Luv u,sis!
Posted: May 14, 2008
are u two sisters?
Oh how sweet....
i miss my sis in India now...this poem is so sweet.....so innocent
Posted: May 15, 2008
Aww, that was really sweet.
It was beautifully written.
~mandy
Posted: May 16, 2008
So sweet. I liked this one so much
Posted: May 26, 2008
I can relate to this one, I had a similar experience with a friend of mine. Only, after we made up we still didn't talk much. She never even invited me to her wedding.
Posted: May 27, 2008
u remind of my younger brother. u know i love him sooooooo much that i gave him a name by which he has been known now. he is soooooooo good in studies - always the first in class. i like teaching him. sometimes he disappoints me, but i just forget that as out of his immaturity. i like the simplicity of ur language very much!!! keep it up. and i hope this meeting u through ur poetry will establish the same friendship among us.
Posted: Jun 9, 2008
Your poem reminds me of a best friend in my teens. We may as well have been sisters. We laughed and shared everything, yet there were small explosions of misunderstanding and frustration and maybe a little jealousy as we grew older and apart. It's sad, but our lives took different turns. We remained friendly, but I haven't had that kind of intense friendship since.
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
This one was very moving. It talked to me about burying the hatchet together. Relationships can turn sour but forgiveness can make it so sweet.
Posted: Jun 19, 2008
Yeah... I guess that everybody have PRECIOUS TIMES in past. :);) Somebody can bury the hatchet together, someone can't. :(( But sometimes need to do things what r so hard to do (I don't know... maybe can't understand idea what I wanted to say, because I don't know english so good... but anyhow, I like it!!! :) It reminds my friend. But we r no longer a friends.).
Posted: Jun 27, 2008
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