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In Malaysia, we have only the rain season, and the draught. View table of contents...
Submitted: May 15, 2008 Reads: 70 Comments: 12 Likes: 7
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This is pretty good.
I liked it.
On to read more of your work =)
~mandy
Posted: May 16, 2008
This was really good! i had no idea there were only two seasons in malaysia...
Posted: May 16, 2008
This was so cute, I love it! To me it captures the essence of human nature: unhappy with the rain, and then unhappy with the sun; the grass is always greener on the other side lol. Awesome!
Stephanee :)
Posted: May 16, 2008
hi! if. u give a good description of what life is in Malaysia. both the seasons are extreme there. good work. ;-)
Posted: May 19, 2008
Nice how the stanzas contradict eachother- i like it.
Ash
Posted: May 21, 2008
I wish I could come there and share ur experiences with you. Can u post some beautiful snaps of the country for us....I love your country and its people..........innocent and sincere and honest
Posted: May 26, 2008
Anything I write now will seem repetitive, so I'll just say that I liked it. ^^
Posted: Jun 7, 2008
even though it did not rhym it was discriptive and good!
Posted: Jun 10, 2008
I forget you have the monsoon seasons. This was an excellent poem in that we are never satisfied. It is either too cold or too hot or too windy or too humid. It is always something.
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
I love this indie! Thanks for inviting me to read, I really like your fresh style;)
The mess caused by the rain was all around me as I read, I felt like I could reach out and pick up a damp cloth!
Great details, not too much; nor too little.
Need a towel? lol;)
~rain
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
Haaa...!!! When U something want, it don't come. When U don't want, it comes. It's like, when U need a book, U can't find it on a table. But when U don't need it. U can see it every where. :):D:D Good one.
Posted: Jun 27, 2008
It's been like that all summer. It's been either chilly and wet, or hot an dry. Wet times we beg for no rain, dry times we beg for rain. I guess each time we got what we wished for huh?
Posted: Sep 25, 2008
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