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HATE... MY ENEMY?

Poem By: inklew1234
Poetry


hmmm... well i wrote this when i was pissed off...
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Submitted: Jul 8, 2008    Reads: 24    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


I dislike this house,

it's inhabitants as well

I'm never getting what I want,

While they get what they believe to be swell

Whilst I stay,

locked away,

the dislike leaves,

as hatred looms nearer

the hate is here,

and with it comes anger,

which is no stranger

IT tells me the truth,

how it's just not fair

All who dwell here, apart from me, are never going to care

I try not to let the curses slip,

but I cannot seem to get a grip

the hatred isn't going away,

but it doesn't seem to hurt me,

to leave my life in dismay

my heart keeps getting colder,

but there's a burning inside me,

the flames keep burning and never smolder,

never smolder


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Comments:

hi! holley. this poem is somuldering with anger but it is a very human emotion. if u r angry, u r angry. and u've brought it out in full force.

why i don't like getting angry is it drains me. so i try to control it. but at times, it gets the better of me.

reading this poem reminds me of my angry times. a lovely read. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

lol. thanks



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