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-Beyond-

Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry


Tags: life, death, god, heaven, beyond

No man knows what lies beyond the final gate, until he crosses it. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 5, 2008    Reads: 45    Comments: 7    Likes: 1   


As we sing our praise
For the lost and gone
I sit to ponder
What went wrong?
 
When life is beauty
Why beauty damned,
To leave to god
At his command?
 
Do I now weep
For those I’ve lost?
Or is it because
I’ll pay their cost?
 
And do I weep
For this life I long,
Or because I’m uncertain
What lies beyond?
What lies beyond...?


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Comments:

i love this poem!!!!

Posted: Sep 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much for this in-depth analysis of my work. =^.^= I love your comments.

once again beautifully sad

Posted: Sep 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Sad? I actually find this piece very pleasing, calming. But to each her own. Thank you very much for all the comments. =^.///=

I really liked this poem....
I love poems that ryhme,
I like the ones that dont rhyme,
but truly love the ones that do.
great job.[angelynn]

Posted: Oct 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Uh... thanks =^.^= Glad you liked it.

LOVE IT. And Love You. ^_^

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Kyaa? =^.^= Much wuv! Thanks.

Yup yup. I'm glad i get to talk to you. The Cuteness missed talking to you vewy vewy much.

Posted: Nov 5, 2008

Author Comment:

And I miss the Cuteness, but in all honesty this is a very inconvenient place to hold a conversation :P

Yeah Yeah i know. ^_^

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

And yet you persist. =^.^=

cuz i cant get on anything else to talk to you while im in school

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Hmm... I guess that makes sense.



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