Random First Lines: Derest Ana,I've betrayed youonce, yet again.IN the mirror,you've shown me truth.Though I was blindand did not... : Young Adult » Read
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Submitted: Jan 2, 2008 Reads: 110 Comments: 14 Likes: 5
Come to me My beautiful Broken soul Come to me My beautiful Blackened rose Come dance with me And we can be free Come sit with me And talk for eternity Come drink with me A toast to all that can be And all that is Come lie with me And whisper of serenity Come walk with me Forever in silent sanctity Come be with me And see All there is to see Come to me My beautiful Broken soul My blackened rose Come to me my love Come be with me.
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Nice rhythm!
Posted: Jan 2, 2008
that was kinda cool. but it kinda makes me wonder about you. i don't know. but good write. keep it up.
peace out.___Lydia____
Posted: Jan 2, 2008
Deep contemplation, touching.
Posted: Jan 4, 2008
I like!! It's sort of like a spell.
Keep up the good work.
Posted: Jan 19, 2008
Flows well, interesting sentiments.
Posted: Apr 13, 2008
i absolutely love this piece.
Posted: Apr 20, 2008
Love the depth used.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
Beautiful... it reminds me of an Evanescence song. I'm not sure which one or why. Perhaps several of them? :)
Posted: Jun 1, 2008
I love this poet it sounds so sweet and lovely.
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
this poem is shit, im most honest to those who deserve it, you show promise because you recognize my own poems,but seriously, this poem is mediocer shit,you must do something Legion
Posted: Aug 24, 2008
very deep. i liked it alot. the rythmic pattern makes you want to keep reading. it adds flare.
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
seductive and pure..
Posted: Aug 29, 2008
awesome structure and flow, really well written. eerie enchantment about it.
Posted: Sep 30, 2008
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