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Confirmism of the Real

Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry


Just a little religious banter. Interesting though I put effort into giving it a nice structure that fits its purpose and it still will take longer to read than it did to write. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 10, 2008    Reads: 29    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


So fall in now
And beget the pain
But speak not your god
In loathe or vain
Conform now
To fall in line
No glory nor death
Not justice or crime

So if you believe yourself lord
For over me you have command
Then fall in with the other fools
And play yourself into my hand

Partake of freedom
You do not know
You’ve reaped the products
You have not sown

So fall in now
And beget the pain
But speak not your god
In loathe or vain
And to your god
You have no name
To speak or summon
Relief or gain

So if you seek a cure from hell
Then turn not your back to me
But open wide your inner eyes
And freedom you may see

Come seek me out
I am your god
But follow me knowing
I am a fraud

So fall in now
And beget the pain
But speak not your god
In loathe or vain
But speak not your god
In loathe or vain
For he and I
We are the same…

We are the same.


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If you care to decode the meaning, please pay heed to the title. It does not dictate the meaning, but it is important none the less.

Posted: May 10, 2008



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