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Poem By: Itsuwari
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Submitted: Aug 20, 2008    Reads: 23    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


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Aimlessly lost in the running of time
Beget the lost parable, the reason and rhyme
Forget all the pain, and fall in line
Forever the daughter of bliss be your sign
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Falling through forests
Of Cedar and Oak
Dresses like silver
Of Satin and Silk
Melodic and mindless
Dance for the gods
How fleeting your life is
Possessed by the odds
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Try not your fate
Karma can kill
Gods can destroy
All senses can feel
Give god your hand he may guide the way
Leave not the path, or in darkness you’ll stay
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Comments:

i always like your poems, because there just so.. deep.. and idk.. it's hard to explain. but there just unlike any other out there. They get me thinking, and make me confused, but thats a good thing. lol (plus its not hard to confuse me, im blonde >.

Posted: Oct 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Wow, thank you so much. =^.^= I love such positive feedback.



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