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Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry


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A collaboration with Baka-chan. =^.^= View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 24, 2008    Reads: 48    Comments: 9    Likes: 1   


What is a rose without thorns
But a flower half as sweet
What is a night without the moon
But a darker night
What is a ocean without the waves
But a mirror to the eyes
There is never reason behind the glass
Never mastery of the soul
We know not what we cannot see
Nor what the future holds
But we look forward to tomorrow
In hopes of better days
Of tolerable odds
Or less of this inevitable pain
But we know not if it comes
We hope for happiness
But sometimes hope for sorrow
We hope in our hearts that the pain isn’t to intense
But what is life without pain
But a way to bide the time
What is a heart without sorrow
But a way to deal with grief
What is a heart without love
But a way to make us meek
But a way to make us meek
What are we now without Her love
What are we now without Her permission
We maybe nothing
Or we maybe something
We may be no one
We may be everyone
But what are we now
In Her eyes
A rose without thorns
A night without the Moon
An Ocean without waves
What are we now
In Her eyes
For She sees everything.


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Comments:

You are quite a introspective and wise poet. I loved it keep writing!

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Well now, this is only half mine. I will tell the other how well it was recieved. Thank you.

to help you out, in the werds of Bukowskie, if your parents start to like your work its getting bad,i would bet that the average parent type would like your work,your very smart, please do something so the creature inside you will shine

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, but she shines. Like a rainbow of sunshine and butterflies. Awww...

As always, I am awestruck! ^-^

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah! Take that! I strike you with awe.

I'm glad people like it. We make a good team, don't we?

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Hai, hai. =^.^=

Hai??

Posted: Nov 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes, yes. =^.^=

Ohh i totally knew that heh heh....... Okay maybe not. +^_^+

Posted: Nov 5, 2008

Author Comment:

=^.^=

I'm sad. v_v

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

='(

its nothing you did. its just something that you will be mad at.

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Care to elaborate?

ummm im failing some classes. v_v

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

So am I >.>'



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