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Fault, Blame, and Judgement

Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry


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Submitted: Jun 8, 2008    Reads: 24    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Screaming
Screaming
For an escape
From life
From death
From
Pain
From
Love
Why do we fight
Why do we kill
Why do we feel
The need
To destroy what’s real
To destroy what’s true
Not me
Not you
But them
And him
The one
The
Son
The heir to this reality
They call his name
As
They slaughter
Is he at fault
Or are they
Or are
We
For standing idly by
Unable to be convinced
We judge them
Criticize them
But it
Is us
Us
Not them
Or will not fight for belief.


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Comments:

RAWR!!! ^o^ I actually completely understand this one. I like it and the free verse style gives it even more direct feeling toward your subject. Very nice!

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

Author Comment:

=^.^= Eskimo Kisses! (Still weird to picture a giant wolf with a wee lit'l Otter.)
Thanks!

Excellent writing!!
Can't say nothing more!

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Again, thank you.



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