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green dragonFlies

Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry


"Do not try to understand it, let it understand you."
~e.e. cummings~ View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 27, 2008    Reads: 55    Comments: 6    Likes: 1   


Green dragonflies
Drifting
          Floating
Soar through
          The sky
Falling
           Beaten
                      From
Their life
           Strife
Fear
No one cares
           No
                One
                       Cares
 
Green
                        dragonFlies
Drifting
          Drifting
Floating
           Floating in the wind
Beaten
           From strife
                          Life
Servile
           subCONSciousness
                Green
Dragons fly
            Far
                 Far
                      Far
                 Away
Drifting
           Floating
                       Escaping…
               …


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Comments:

wow umm wow there are no words for it... it's differnt and it sounds as if your the dragonfly

Posted: Sep 28, 2008

Author Comment:

I wish I was a dragonfly! That'd be fucking awesome =^.^=

a friend
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really good but a little confusing

Posted: Sep 30, 2008

Author Comment:

It is not meant to be simple.

I don't know what to say.

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Then say nothing at all, thank you =^.^=

But it's sooooooo good. It's beyond words. -^_^-

Posted: Nov 5, 2008

Author Comment:

>.>'

wa?? im happy and hyper but if you want ill calm down

Posted: Nov 5, 2008

Author Comment:

As if I care. :p
=^.^=

Ouch that sounded really mean. 'v_v

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Then it's a good thing I didn't mean it.



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